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(Pick ups will be deleted after a month, please comment to tell me if you picked it up)
TNAWRESTLING4EVER (15/05/08)
SITE NAME:8/10
In caps? The name is too bold.
POPULARITY:2/15
Well, you practically have no comments and subs. You need to promote your site more.
UPDATES:10/10
You update frequency.
CONTENT:10/10
You have so much information, but it is wasted because not much people go to your site.
ORIGINALITY: 10/10
This is extremely original, not many people do this kind of stuff.
CREATIVITY: 9/10
Love how you did your site similar to a sports report channel.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
No mistakes.
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 5/10
You have scroll boxes, but you have too much color and they don't match. All your blogs are different sized, and you change fonts a lot.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 5/10
Well, the second banner with people is very good, but the banner on top is messed up. The colors don't match, the font looks old fashioned.
BONUS POINTS: +4
Does your links work?- [x]
Could we read your font?- [x]
Are your scroll boxes working properly?- [x]
Your site not offensive?- [x]
Our impression- [ ]
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 74/100
Grade: C+
Advice: Take that first banner away, advertise whenever you add a new post, fix your layout to make it less bulky, use a stable font, pick a few colors that match and use it through out your whole site. Nice concept though :P
games_jonasfanfic (15/05/08)
SITE NAME:8/10
Relevant but a bit hard to memorize.
POPULARITY:13/15
Great amount of subs, but might need more comment supports.
UPDATES:10/10
You update frequency.
CONTENT:10/10
Great stories, might consider to add more chapters when you have time.
ORIGINALITY: 10/10
This is extremely original, no one out there had been doing this :]
CREATIVITY: 10/10
Love how the stories are entertaining but not offensive.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
Nope.
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 10/10
Very neat. Colors match. All the scroll boxes are very clear.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 10/10
The background color is very attractive, the picture the first thing people look at so great job!
BONUS POINTS: +5
Very organized, original, love how you put the links, all font is visible, i just plainly love your concept.
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 97/100
Grade: A+
Advice: Promote your site more every time you release a chapter, and set goals for comments and subs before you release your second chapter. This way you will get more popularity, which is the only thing you need to work on now. :]
icedkissesx3 (11/05/08.collected)
SITE NAME:9/10
Cute name but it doesn't tell if you are a personal site or what.
POPULARITY:14/15
Great amount of comments but you need more subs.
UPDATES:10/10
You update frequently.
CONTENT:10/10
Great layouts and icons, but you'll need a lot more.
ORIGINALITY: 10/10
Great. I love your fabulous layout, the others are a little plain.
CREATIVITY: 9/10
Great icons, but you need more than just vanessa and ashley.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
Nothing I could see :]
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 10/10
Very neat and organized.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 8/10
The first thing I noticed is the vanessa icons. Also, you have too much color all over the place- green, grey, pink, orange..
BONUS POINTS: +5
All your links work, the customs are very organized, adore your layouts, beautiful editing, nice background music.
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 95/100
Grade: A
Advice: Where you put your site of the week, subs, and comments: don't use a scroll bar, it makes it messy. For your titles, the heart, replace the green with pink or orange. Have a little banner that says "subscribe to icedkissesx3" that links to the subscribe age, you could have a fading vanessa in it so that the vanessa icons won't be so random.
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intensefusion (11/05/08)
SITE NAME:9/10
Cute name but maybe a little difficult to memorize.
POPULARITY:15/15
Lots of subs and comments.
UPDATES:10/10
You update everyday :]
CONTENT:9/10
Great graphics, quotes, icons, fades, and profiles. Maybe add more in the future to each section though.
ORIGINALITY: 9/10
Never seen them anywhere<3 Need to add more personal style to your quotes though.
CREATIVITY: 10/10
Very creative.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
No mistakes/ errors.
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 10/10
Very neat. Love your titles. All your links work.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 9/10
Everything is very organized and color coded, very neat and tidy. The only thing is, the banner which says "click to subscribe" the font is too narrow, you should make it bold. Otherwise, everything is fine.
BONUS POINTS: +5
Very high quality, very organized, lots of popularity, love your graphics, great site.
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 96/100
Grade: A+
Advice: Make the scroll box bigger for the profiles and the fades, change the font for the banner, and the two cute pictures above your info, the right one is bigger than the left, otherwise, good luck :]
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raewrites__x3 (10/05/08)
SITE NAME:9/10
Cute name but kind of hard to memorize.
POPULARITY:14/15
Great amount of subs and comments.
UPDATES:10/10
You update frequency.
CONTENT:10/10
Great quotes and icons. I like the photography best :]
ORIGINALITY: 10/10
Should add more personal touches to the quotes.
CREATIVITY: 10/10
Love the color, and how there are different font sizes for each quote.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
Nothing I could see.
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 10/10
Very neat. Colors match. Custom molecules very organized.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 7/10
When you scroll down, it looks very organized and pretty. But when it is first load up, the banner is a bit weird, it sort of clashes with the background color.
BONUS POINTS: +5
All your links work, the customs are very organized, love your photography, high quality work, beautiful editing work.
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 93/100
Grade: A
Advice: Make the font size bigger for the quotes, change the banner (I suggest you make a simple banner with the site name only, using those colors), good luck :]
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cuteqts (08/05/08. collected)
SITE NAME:10/10
Great, easy to remember and tells what you provide.
POPULARITY:14/15
Good subs but maybe a bit more comments :]
UPDATES:10/10
You update everyday.
CONTENT:10/10
Lots of stuff, great icons and quotes.
ORIGINALITY:9/10
Could add more personal touch but generally very original.
CREATIVITY: 10/10.
Love your quotes.
SPELLING/GRAMMER: 10/10
Nothing spelled wrong x]
ORGANIZATION/NEATNESS: 10/10
Right box molecules, scroll boxes.
FIRST IMPRESSION: 9/10
Very attractive, love the colors, but the links on the top change the color because now it doesn't match.
BONUS POINTS: + 4
You have sisters, girl of the week, lots of credits, nice music.
Total Possible Points: 100/100
Total Points Received: 96/100
Grade: A+
Advice: In your right box molecules, make them the same width, because the 1st one is bigger than the second. Change the link colors to pink, orange, or green, to match your site
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